Orbit
Karl walked, Word had summoned him, he did not blink, did not complain, this day was obligation and promise, he left his home that was a garden with rich soil, plants grew in care an nurture, all were watered by a stream of gurgling crystal water, the life essence of everything.
Outside Karl's garden the land was unpredictable, bandits roamed looking for opportunity to further their realms, in this realm Karl had to always be on guard, but the memories of home grew an armour strengthened by Word.
It was into this wild unpredictable land that Word led Karl, he walked with steady feet between walls of stone, carved through mountains and down into valleys, there was danger with every step that Karl took, he had enemies, powerful, lurking in shadows that formed the shape of scorpions, who lifted their tails ready to strike but they sensed the time was not right.
Shadows obscure and hide unseen forces who wait for any sign of doubt, they have interest in turning Word's protected to hearts that favour the wild raucous anything goes empires that fight for territory in the land. Karl's only hope of protection is placed in word.
Stone trickles down the side of rock walls as Karl walks past, scorpions lift their tails higher, an attack is planned, some release their barbs, but Karl's armour, fastened with truth, light, unseen by a blind enemy, is able to deflect the barbs that fall to the ground with the pebbles that slide down the chasms walls.
This is the day, come rest with me, bells call, Word call, Karl looks forward to the rest stop where he can join with Word's gathered, there strength, given by word and feast are given, the witness is given, soft gentle nurture strengthens and repairs any cracks in Karl's armour.
This is Word's call, to witness, to love, to be on the frontier, exciting more to be washed in life's water, the road is not always clear, sometimes enemies threaten to overwhelm, but for Karl there is no doubt that Word comes to him, walks with him, and that one day in every seven the light of Word shines, life's purpose to listen to hear, Word speak.
Good imagery!
ReplyDeleteThe power of Word to strengthen us on this daily quest. Nice. Thanks for your post!
ReplyDeleteHi Marilyn,
ReplyDeleteI really liked this post, I hope you take this story futher because you are on to something here. We can and will be hurt by the world's attacks but it is important to remember that God wins in the end.
And the twenty-four elders, who were seated on their thrones before God, fell on their faces and worshiped God, 17 saying:
“We give thanks to you, Lord God Almighty,
the One who is and who was,
because you have taken your great power
and have begun to reign."
Revelation 11:16-17
Very cool, Marilyn! I'm in the middle of writing about the armor of God and loved seeing it here. Thanks for a great day beginning.
ReplyDeleteI see you write in more of a stream of consciousness style which I am un accustomed to reading. Sounds like it is part of a larger work. Best of luck with it.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of word pictures, although like Christine, I felt a bit like I came in late. Peace and Blessings
ReplyDeleteMay we all rest in the protection of 'the Word'.
ReplyDeleteThe change in verb tense from the third to fourth paragraph threw me, but otherwise I really enjoyed this tale; it brought to mind "Pilgrim's Progress" and "Hind's Feet on High Places." Great addition to our Quest topic. :)
ReplyDeleteThat was an awesome read and a great reminder. Wonderful :)
ReplyDeleteI liked the use of 'Word' as both aname and metaphor for God. Very nice
ReplyDeleteThe WORD is our strength, source, leader, lover and light! Loved it Marilynn- great post!
ReplyDeleteThis was amazing! Great post for this topic.
ReplyDeleteIn the beginning was the Word,,,,
ReplyDeletegood post
Great job! I enjoyed reading your words.
ReplyDeleteYour last line sent the lyrics, "Word of God speak..." into my mind. How amazing that the Word IS God, living, breathing, yesterday, today, forever! Blessings to you, Marilyn!
ReplyDeleteAn interesting allegory...very enjoyable. Peace and Blessings
ReplyDeleteReminds me of Pilgrim's Progress :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for your post which encourages us to have faith in God during the dangers and difficulties of the world.
ReplyDeleteI do notice that you have combined a lot of sentences together with commas, where it would have been better to separate them with a few full stops.
Thanks for your contribution to the chain.